英語四級作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　1. 本題滿分為15分

　　2. 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。

　　3. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對照樣卷評分，若認(rèn)為所閱文章與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如8分)相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分);若認(rèn)為所閱文章稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)。但不得加或減半分。

　　4. 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

　　5. 2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

　　5分——基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。

　　8分——基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

　　11分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。

　　14分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。

　　[注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。]

　　作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1

　　得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7

　　下面看一下作文得分11分的范文

　　11分

　　Nowadays, many parents do everything for their children. They cook meals and wash clothes for their children. And they even make all the choices for their children. Everything has done by the parents and the children will do nothing but following the parents’ decisions。

　　In order to help children to be independent, parents should follow the suggestions given below. First, let children do some housework, such as washing dishes and cleaning rooms. These works will not take too much time, but they are suitable for children to learn to live independently. Second, give the chance to manage the family to children. As a family member, child should know how to manage the family. And the parents should teach them this kind of skills. In this way, children can learn the necessary abilities to live on their own. And most important, give freedom to children and let them make their own choice. Only in this way can children grow up healthily。

　　下面看一下作文得分8分的范文。

　　8分

　　Nowdays, many parents do everything for their children. There are many reasons for parents to do that. The first one is that they love their children and want them live better. All these things makes the children don’t know how to live without parents. They don’t know how to be independent。

　　What the parents do have a really bad effect to their children. So they should try another way. They should teach their children how to do things instead of doing things for them. Then, they should let the children know that they would leave one day and children must live by themselves. So the children have to learn to live alone when it is not too late. Next, parents should put it into practice. They may creat more chance for children to live alone when children are young。

　　If parents do well in these ways, their children will surely know how to be independent。

　　下面看一下作文得分5分的范文。

　　5分

　　Recent years, a topic of how should parents help children to be independent, which has aroused widely public attention. As far as I am concerned that is right in a sense, which parents do every thing for their children. Because of the children is parents’s all things. However, I am favor of parents should help children to be independent as soon as possible。

　　How should parents help children to be independent. In my opinion, parents should believe their children first. Parents should be certain with their children can recognize the true or fault and right or wrong of something. Secondly, parents had best to let their children to relize the responsity of himself and the family. In addition, parents also need to connect with their children and know about what children is doing recently。

　　By doing so, children may make mistake even lost their way and so on. However, don’t worried, parents. Your children must be succeed from their experience。

　　下面看一下作文得分2分的范文。

　　2分

　　In the world, how many people is very happy? Because they are has parents, friends, teachers and so on. They are takes much love for them. So they are very happy。

　　In present, parents are doing much more anything for their childrens. Including anything in the home. For example, their clothes, their dinner, their friends and so on. In the school, their parents takes them for school by car, by bike and on foot. For their children safe. Today’s children don’t do anything except their parents。

　　For children alone in the world. For children doing anything alone in the world. Parents makes do exchange themselves。

　　Parents aren’t do anything for their children. They can do something by themselves. They can with their friends to go to school, to buy something in the story and so on parents should not upset. Allow their children doing themself.

　　Parents should do anything for their childrens, but doesn’t do all the things for their childrens.