話說完了,畢竟要?dú)w納一番,雅思大作文也是如此,開頭很好,也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾,讓讀者眼前一亮。這樣,你就可以拿高分了!雖然雅思作文的分?jǐn)?shù)并不是取決于結(jié)尾段落,但是一個(gè)漂亮而干脆的結(jié)尾段還是會(huì)讓雅思考官眼前一亮,也會(huì)將前文出現(xiàn)的小瑕疵掩蓋掉,把大作文的分?jǐn)?shù)拿到*高。以下是根據(jù)多年的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)總結(jié)的一些黃金招式。
招式一:回答問題answer thequestion
E.g. When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I thinkit is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friendand support our way of life.
這個(gè)結(jié)尾段落明確地提出了自己的觀點(diǎn),不是所有的科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。
招式二:不添加新的信息not apply anynew information
E.g. Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.
用1句話明確自己的觀點(diǎn),幸福很難定義,可能有兩個(gè)因素起到作用。
招式三:2-3個(gè)句子為宜 2-3 sentences are enough
E.g. Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
Finally, Ithink it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work. If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.
2句話,作者的態(tài)度很明確,學(xué)生不可能花所有的時(shí)間去學(xué)習(xí),否者就會(huì)完全失去對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)的興趣,所以也應(yīng)該給學(xué)生一些放松的時(shí)間。
一般在結(jié)尾段的*開始部分,考生就應(yīng)該給考官一個(gè)明確的信號(hào)詞,讓考官了解文章已經(jīng)進(jìn)入尾聲了。這里所謂的信號(hào)詞就是一些結(jié)尾段的套句:
信號(hào)詞:Finally, to sum up, inconclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall
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